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  1. THE CASE OF THE CURSE CHALET BY ANNE SCHRAFF

    Chapter One

    Nina is a 22 year old woman who is a assassint manager at high chalet a ski lodge mountains.
    In chalet 17 a couple name The Osborns heard scary sounds from the window and alot of knocking the the floor.

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  2. USE THE DATE FOR THE ENTRY: Tuesday, January 8, 2013

    - remember to use correct punctuation (capital sentences and periods)

    NUMBER EACH ANSWER FOR EACH QUESTION:
    1.

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  3. 1:She was fully recovered from her injurey and returning home from pakastan.

    2:She was shot by a taliban and moe to the UK to have her fully recoverd from the shot.

    3:She might be able to make a speech if she is comfortaby safe from the taliban.

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  4. Thanks for answering all of the questions, Kenny.

    Here are a few things I thought of while I was reading your answers.

    Use the clue from the photo to add the point that she is being released from the hospital and then returning home to Pakistan.

    Why was she shot by the Taliban? I think this is a key detail which should be included in your answer.

    What do you think she will make a speech on?

    Use the program Read and Write Gold to help you listen to your responses to make corrections to your work.

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  5. #1 Batmau5.

    #2 I made a deadmau5 costume in halloween and people are really impressed with it that makes me really happy.

    # I have a wallpaper in my iphone so i will always remember it.

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  6. The costume you created at Halloween should have won the contest! You put a lot of effort into this work and look forward to seeing you use some of these skills more when you venture into high school this September.

    I am happy to hear and see how Art makes you feel, especially deadmau5. If that inspires you, that's great. The fact that you have it on your phone shows that you recognize that it is something which makes you happy.
    :)

    For you own knowledge, in question #2, people "were" impressed with your costume because it happened in the past. When you are writing about yourself, use "I" instead of "i."

    Keep loving and doing Art!

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  7. Chris Spence was copying other peoples work in the Toronto star TDSB. The person found out that he copied a Anita L. Defrantz then they begin investigating they found more evidence of him copying from other sources. In January 10 he made a disunion to quit his job on being the director of the TDSB his job earn him $272,000 a year for being a director of TDSB.

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  8. Thanks for your entry, Kenny.

    You did a good job on the top portion of the Reading Response, the Retell part. I would like to see you complete the other two portions:
    RELATE: Where you make connection with what he did to things in your life (have you ever cheated before or been cheated by someone)
    REFLECT: This is where you share what you have learned from the article.

    If you have any questions, please ask me.

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  9. 1. why did martin luthor volunteer to speak up for the the black people?.

    because black people are being treated badly and said everyone treated equally.

    2.where was he born?

    he was born at atlanta georgia january 15 1929

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  10. The second question is still a Level 1 question and you need to use the chart to create questions for Level 2 - 4.

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  11. You seem to be on the right track. Good for you.

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  12. 1. why did martin luthor volunteer to speak up for the the black people?.

    because black people are being treated badly and said everyone treated equally.

    2.where was he born?

    he was born at Atlanta Georgia January 15 1929

    3.Why would someone assassinate martin luthor king

    there where no evidence of why the person killed martin
    but they found the person who killed martin luthor king and sent him to a death penalty for 99 years.

    4.

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  13. Good to see you moving along in this project.

    Your third question could work as a Level 3 or 4 question, it will be up to you.
    You have a Level 1 question for #1.

    Go through your list and ask each question.

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  14. Level 1 Question:
    why did martin luthor volunteer to speak up for the the black people?.
    Level 1 Answer:
    because black people are being treated badly and said everyone treated equally.
    Level 2 Question:
    here was he born?
    Level 2 Answer:
    he was born at Atlanta Georgia January 15 1929
    Level 3 Question:
    Why would someone assassinate martin luthor king
    Level 3 Answer:
    there where no evidence of why the person killed martin
    but they found the person who killed martin luthor king and sent him to a death penalty for 99 years.

    Level 4 Question:

    Level 4 Answer:

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  15. I suggest changing your Level 1 question to: WHY DID MARTIN LUTHER KING JR. SPEAK UP FOR BLACK PEOPLE?

    Once you change this, you will have Levels 1-3 completed and need to complete Level 4. I would want you to make sure you have some more information and not just one word answers.

    Good for you for working your way through this project.

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  16. Level 4 Question: What was Martin luthor king's famous quote

    level 4 Answer: "Everything that we see is a shadow cast by that which we do not see"
    Martin Luthor King.

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  17. I heard you asking about a Level 4 question.
    The Level 4 questions begin with a How or Why. Think about this and the information you have about Martin Luther King Jr.

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  18. Jason collin was the first gay basketball player who said he was gay
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    He had a quote when he was a child he raise his hand up because he was different from among other people.

    Tons of people really don't care if he was gay or not

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  19. Hi Kenny. I see that you understand what the article is about. I think Jason Collins is the first player to come out about being Gay while still being a player in the NBA.

    What is it about Jason raising his hand? I did not really understand that part of your entry, but it sounds like a very interesting point.

    You are probably write, many people don't really care if he is straight or Gay. I think that is a good thing because his sexual orientation shouldn't matter or be a big issue. I guess he was feeling some sort of pressure to come out and say something. Was that point, about people not really caring, yours or from the newspaper?

    Consider adding a few more details to make your entry stronger and clearer.

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  20. I ate the Lighting Lighting Fruit that makes me the speed of lighting and allows me to control the weather and put my enemies in a shock if you know what im saying i have an other ability besides that i have the power to predict moves and dodge them that is what called mantra - Enel

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  21. My Weakness is Sea Water if i have one drip of sea water on me my powers will weaken and i will drown in the sea i could not swim either since i ate the lighting lighting fruit i am forbidden to enter the sea forever

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  22. Now this sounds like some of this is made up.
    The powers you have are based on the things you have talents with or think you are good at.

    I am wondering if one of your struggles is swimming because you talk about sea water making you weak.

    This is a good start, but have a look at my example to help you understand how you might approach this small project from another angle.

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  23. Be sure to add a few more changes to Part a) of the assignment!

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